The little auto rickshaw,
That I use most every day
Instills in me great
fear,
I won’t live another
day.
On Mumbai’s crowded
streets,
Where twenty million
thrive,
They whiz in and out
of traffic,
Like a creature that’s
alive.
Black and yellow vehicles,
That hold just two or
three,
Will never be the
ride of choice,
For a coward such as
me.
Their little putt
putt engine,
Strains with all its
might,
To see them out in
numbers,
Is really quite a
sight.
They are mostly open
air,
Which can truly be a
pain,
At certain times of
year,
When there is monsoon
rain.
They really are quite
daring,
Darting all about,
Stopping inches from
the car ahead,
While I suppress a shout.
They don’t possess a
seat belt,
So you have to hold
on tight,
My fingers have
indentions,
Where I’ve gripped
with all my might.
The local folks seem
quite at ease,
More relaxed, than
me, by far.
I feel like I’m at a
carnival,
Riding in a dodge ‘em
car!
The drivers are
kamikazes,
Who won’t admit
defeat,
As they steer their
little vehicles,
Usually driving in
bare feet!
I think they get
great pleasure,
Seeing panic in my
eyes,
But I am slowly
overcoming it,
Much to my surpise.
Carmen Henesy
Copyright © August 25,
2013 by Carmen Henesy. All Rights Reserved.
lol! A wonderful versification of an auto ride!!
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing, Deepak,I can even write a rickshaw now and play Scrabble online. I know I should watch for imminent death but I have goten better about it am I becoming an Indian?
DeleteWhat a great poem, Carmen to accompany those photos!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Icy. In the height of rush hour traffic, it is pretty terrifying to be in a rickshaw. I think each ride will be my last!
DeleteWell done, Carmen!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Pat...not a love sonnet but it seems most of my poetry is rather comical these days.
DeleteThey have those in Thailand too and they call them TukTuk. Great poem here too.
ReplyDeleteYes, Ruthie, I've ridden on them in Bangkok - equally terrifying!
DeleteGood read,interesting description & that Carmen touch.
ReplyDeleteYou are a class apart.
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Hello, my very favorite doctor in India ( actually, you're right up there in the tops with all the doctors I know in the entire world ). Why can't I write love poetry so easily? I guess because I don't have a sweetheart. What have I been doing wrong?
DeleteThe way most of the world drives motor vehicles is pretty scary
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