tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post3184968533723900433..comments2024-03-22T02:19:36.295-07:00Comments on Carmen's Chronicles: Lonely Nights - Flash 55 FridayRNSANEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-66791173005995684232010-02-06T04:22:15.844-08:002010-02-06T04:22:15.844-08:00beautifulbeautifulmagiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-78930981340519836992010-02-05T23:52:16.109-08:002010-02-05T23:52:16.109-08:00Peter Stone -
thanks for reading my first 55! I&...Peter Stone - <br />thanks for reading my first 55! I'm glad you liked it.<br /><br />Enchanted Oak - <br />that was quite a task. I'll try my hand at doing the 55 again. I normally write rhyming verse so this was different for me.<br /><br />Kamana -<br />thank you for reading my non rhyming effort!<br /><br />Ronda - <br />many thanks. It was my first effort at Flash 55.RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-76993996980407600662010-02-05T23:25:31.353-08:002010-02-05T23:25:31.353-08:00I can almost see those two hearts separating and w...I can almost see those two hearts separating and walking alone. Great 55.Ronda Laveenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03902846545309643023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-67182143444678447132010-02-05T22:02:07.725-08:002010-02-05T22:02:07.725-08:00wow, i can never do those tell a take in xx words....wow, i can never do those tell a take in xx words. good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-22120056588404527992010-02-05T21:57:03.426-08:002010-02-05T21:57:03.426-08:00You did a lovely job with this poem, Carmen. It ha...You did a lovely job with this poem, Carmen. It has guts. Nice going for your first go-round.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-49237018115263749722010-02-05T21:54:52.626-08:002010-02-05T21:54:52.626-08:00This 55 really, really tugs at the heart strings. ...This 55 really, really tugs at the heart strings. Your descriptions so vivid that I could visualize it all...Peter Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04896115247438514660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-68604574160254366232010-02-05T20:50:04.247-08:002010-02-05T20:50:04.247-08:00Snowbrush -
how nice to see you here. I am glad y...Snowbrush - <br />how nice to see you here. I am glad you liked my poem. I also hope you are feeling well in these winter months!RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-76710821879109500302010-02-05T20:47:32.534-08:002010-02-05T20:47:32.534-08:00Bernie -
I am sorry if I stirred up sad memories f...Bernie -<br />I am sorry if I stirred up sad memories for you.<br />It must be really hard, at times, to be without someone you have loved for so many years.RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-57673971271082483912010-02-05T20:46:21.040-08:002010-02-05T20:46:21.040-08:00Ratty -
I hope I didn't make you too sad with...Ratty - <br />I hope I didn't make you too sad with this, my<br />friend! At least you can get outdoors and have a <br />good hike.RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-55640169063881758012010-02-05T20:45:16.287-08:002010-02-05T20:45:16.287-08:00Susan Erickson -
While most of this was fiction, ...Susan Erickson - <br />While most of this was fiction, I certainly have<br />experienced the pain of lost love and longing!RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-41502003446352391382010-02-05T20:43:18.097-08:002010-02-05T20:43:18.097-08:00Susan -
This was my first venture into Flash 55 -...Susan -<br />This was my first venture into Flash 55 - glad people liked it!RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-46433636125878510992010-02-05T20:41:13.446-08:002010-02-05T20:41:13.446-08:00Brian Miller -
I thank you for your kind words. ...Brian Miller - <br />I thank you for your kind words. Though I have certainly been alone at times, this didn't relate to any particular memory of mine.RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-33117868965634615052010-02-05T20:36:52.970-08:002010-02-05T20:36:52.970-08:00What a beautiful poem, Carmen.What a beautiful poem, Carmen.Snowbrushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00436087215476479042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-52835961598123085302010-02-05T20:28:34.386-08:002010-02-05T20:28:34.386-08:00Since my husband has passed away, there are times ...Since my husband has passed away, there are times I feel exactly like this.....:-) HugsBerniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03024565921761129108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-28591933168373081362010-02-05T20:28:06.113-08:002010-02-05T20:28:06.113-08:00ρομπερτ -
My poetry is usually rhyming verse so it...ρομπερτ -<br />My poetry is usually rhyming verse so it was a challenge to do something to participate in this Friday "Flash 55" piece. The tale is fiction though I certainly have a number of lost love memories from which I can draw. <br /><br />Hope your Athens weekend is good fun!RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-89734528735614773532010-02-05T20:26:03.947-08:002010-02-05T20:26:03.947-08:00Poetic Shutterbug -
I'm glad you liked this.....Poetic Shutterbug - <br />I'm glad you liked this...you know it is not my usual style of poetry and it is all fiction, really.RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-63249784894951308972010-02-05T20:21:32.534-08:002010-02-05T20:21:32.534-08:00G-Man -
I've read some Flash 55 posts and it ...G-Man - <br />I've read some Flash 55 posts and it seemed like fun but I thought it was too much of an effort. I usually write rhyming verse and trying to do that in 55 words gave me a headache - though you certainly did a great job! I will try it again, for sure. You have a great weekend, too.RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-31853690391366133622010-02-05T19:10:34.840-08:002010-02-05T19:10:34.840-08:00OMG!!!
Carmen...?
This was so brilliantly sad.
You...OMG!!!<br />Carmen...?<br />This was so brilliantly sad.<br />Your First 55?<br />WOW...So very perfect.<br />I've read probably 60 of these today, and yours was the Best so far in my opinion.<br />And thats all that counts...hahahaha<br />Please join us again next Friday...You Rock Baby!<br />Have a Kick Ass Week-End...GalenG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-45613862463651091172010-02-05T18:41:20.700-08:002010-02-05T18:41:20.700-08:00This one makes me feel as if I am there experienci...This one makes me feel as if I am there experiencing it.Rick (Ratty)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04062449024949497557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-32689384431615608742010-02-05T17:56:28.074-08:002010-02-05T17:56:28.074-08:00I've been there...vey hauntingI've been there...vey hauntingmermaid galleryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04678555215616371872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-48008027376581843472010-02-05T17:49:59.331-08:002010-02-05T17:49:59.331-08:00"memories of love bouncing off the empty wall..."memories of love bouncing off the empty walls" speaks volumes about the loss. Great 55.<br /><br />I'm up right <a href="http://inappropriatesue.blogspot.com/2010/02/55-flash-fiction-friday-you-get-in-you.html" rel="nofollow"><strong>HERE</strong></a>inappropriatesuehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04794493392025799654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-81607792479809333882010-02-05T16:50:28.809-08:002010-02-05T16:50:28.809-08:00What a challenge. What a heart felt poetry of your...What a challenge. What a heart felt poetry of yours. Being born in a full moon night , this was for sure of interest. It is indeed, this hope, this (damn) hope that keeps life moving on.<br /><br />A wonderful weekend for you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-63025425655782793792010-02-05T16:33:04.619-08:002010-02-05T16:33:04.619-08:00wow. great 55...can feel that emptiness...
my 55 ...wow. great 55...can feel that emptiness...<br /><br />my 55 is up!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-22487924766969930342010-02-05T16:10:53.767-08:002010-02-05T16:10:53.767-08:00Carmen, this is absolutely fantastic. One of your...Carmen, this is absolutely fantastic. One of your best - the imagery is rich and I love the style. Well done.Joanne Olivierihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01856998108256408734noreply@blogger.com