tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post3660816015238542750..comments2024-03-22T02:19:36.295-07:00Comments on Carmen's Chronicles: Magpie Tales 58, The Eve Before Battle, March 22, 2011RNSANEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-12422133344301809422011-03-30T10:42:23.846-07:002011-03-30T10:42:23.846-07:00Now I want to know the battlecry, too? Not "G...Now I want to know the battlecry, too? Not "Geronimo!" I hope? LOLjinksyhttp://pens-poems.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-85387801065936314962011-03-24T12:30:37.678-07:002011-03-24T12:30:37.678-07:00Brian Miller -
I thought this was a difficult prom...Brian Miller -<br />I thought this was a difficult prompt for which to conceive a poem - glad you liked it!<br /><br /><br />MaxiVelasco -<br />I am very pleased you liked this very different poem from me. It's interesting writing something with Tess Kinkaid's Magpie prompts. Some come very easily and some, like this one, really are difficult for me.<br /><br /><br />earlybird -<br />I had the hardest time with this poem so I am really pleased that folks liked it.<br /><br /><br />My Farmhouse Kitchen -<br />Still haven't tried the cookies - maybe this weekend. Jeremy is in a posh apartment building called the Edgewater, over by the Giants stadium. His unit is two bedrooms, two baths and normally rents for $3300/mo. They got it for $1000 less - connections!<br /><br /><br />Tess Kinkaid -<br />This poem didn't come very easily to me. Somehow, writing about battle and swords isn't my forte.<br /><br /><br />Christine -<br />Yes, the realities of war are pretty horrible. I wish we never had them!<br /><br /><br />rosaria -<br />I cherish a compliment, coming from you, someone who is such an excellent writer!<br /><br /><br />~✿~Icy BC -<br />Writing about love or flowers or the sea is a much easier task than trying to come up with verse about battle!<br /><br /><br />Helen -<br />I enjoy Magpie Tales so much. I don't participate all the time because my brain isn't also functional!<br /><br /><br />Carrie Burtt -<br />I am so pleased that you liked my Magpie! Thanks for stopping by my blog. I hope to see you again.<br /><br /><br />Sharkbytes -<br />I could see a lavish multimillion dollar major studio production with some superstar playing the hero, leading his men into battle!<br /><br /><br />12 comments: <br /> MaxiVelasco said... <br />Hello dear Carmen.<br /><br />This poem gives my heart a little pinch. It's just four paragraph long but every word creates a story in my imagination. My imagination is giving me a pretty ending though... that these warriors will give a great fight and will always be remembered.<br /><br />Have a nice day :) <br /><br />1:54 AM <br /> earlybird said... <br />I enjoyed this response to the photo - stirring stuff, but realistic: 'no life for them ahead' <br /><br />4:15 AM <br /> Tess Kincaid said... <br />I can see that restless stallion. <br /><br />5:05 AM <br /> Christine said... <br />No life for them ahead. Stark reality of what really happens, very nice. <br /><br />7:49 AM <br /> Brian Miller said... <br />charge!!!! nice capture of that moment...i am a fan of medievil history and battles...you hit the spot today... <br /><br />7:49 AM <br /> rosaria said... <br />Lovely tension in this poem! You have so much talent, dear one. <br /><br />9:45 AM <br /> ~✿~Icy BC said... <br />I have to echo Brian's comment! What a wonderful poem! <br /><br />1:02 PM <br /> Helen said... <br />I also thought of battle when I saw the photo .. nicely done. <br /><br />1:42 PM <br /> My Farmhouse Kitchen said... <br />hi carmen...your son moved to san francisco... where ? my dream is to live in the city...<br /><br />and the cookies are good...let me know if you make them...<br />sending love today,<br />kary and teddy<br />xxx <br /><br />2:21 PM <br /> Carrie Burtt said... <br />Carmen this is a magnificent poem for the prompt....flowing and beautiful! :-) <br /><br />5:17 PM <br /> Sharkbytes said... <br />interesting interpretation - very classical <br /><br /> <br />Pat @ Mille Fiori Favoriti -<br />I do have fun with the poems...though this one was a bit difficult to write!RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-40789168030191905442011-03-22T19:30:45.225-07:002011-03-22T19:30:45.225-07:00You have such a wonderful talent for writing poems...You have such a wonderful talent for writing poems, Carmen!Pat @ Mille Fiori Favoritihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08922525910685129822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-58837937254091573352011-03-22T19:28:50.000-07:002011-03-22T19:28:50.000-07:00interesting interpretation - very classicalinteresting interpretation - very classicalSharkbyteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10139935335209860357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-72549289010072483402011-03-22T17:17:27.529-07:002011-03-22T17:17:27.529-07:00Carmen this is a magnificent poem for the prompt.....Carmen this is a magnificent poem for the prompt....flowing and beautiful! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-79905387014470086012011-03-22T14:21:20.328-07:002011-03-22T14:21:20.328-07:00hi carmen...your son moved to san francisco... whe...hi carmen...your son moved to san francisco... where ? my dream is to live in the city...<br /><br />and the cookies are good...let me know if you make them...<br />sending love today,<br />kary and teddy<br />xxxMy Farmhouse Kitchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00594238190107766755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-83882013308368657972011-03-22T13:42:20.632-07:002011-03-22T13:42:20.632-07:00I also thought of battle when I saw the photo .. n...I also thought of battle when I saw the photo .. nicely done.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-63069951197852731302011-03-22T13:02:09.450-07:002011-03-22T13:02:09.450-07:00I have to echo Brian's comment! What a wonderf...I have to echo Brian's comment! What a wonderful poem!•°°• IcyBC •°°•https://www.blogger.com/profile/07081029443524398660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-82844603082654379152011-03-22T09:45:57.060-07:002011-03-22T09:45:57.060-07:00Lovely tension in this poem! You have so much tale...Lovely tension in this poem! You have so much talent, dear one.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-25552052146086031252011-03-22T07:49:49.223-07:002011-03-22T07:49:49.223-07:00charge!!!! nice capture of that moment...i am a fa...charge!!!! nice capture of that moment...i am a fan of medievil history and battles...you hit the spot today...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-40820390458421450572011-03-22T07:49:03.889-07:002011-03-22T07:49:03.889-07:00No life for them ahead. Stark reality of what rea...No life for them ahead. Stark reality of what really happens, very nice.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-26167861280495056352011-03-22T05:05:10.884-07:002011-03-22T05:05:10.884-07:00I can see that restless stallion.I can see that restless stallion.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-81263882429646821632011-03-22T04:15:40.379-07:002011-03-22T04:15:40.379-07:00I enjoyed this response to the photo - stirring st...I enjoyed this response to the photo - stirring stuff, but realistic: 'no life for them ahead'earlybirdhttp://mangetoutetc.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35775558.post-63639120271696660812011-03-22T01:54:42.805-07:002011-03-22T01:54:42.805-07:00Hello dear Carmen.
This poem gives my heart a lit...Hello dear Carmen.<br /><br />This poem gives my heart a little pinch. It's just four paragraph long but every word creates a story in my imagination. My imagination is giving me a pretty ending though... that these warriors will give a great fight and will always be remembered.<br /><br />Have a nice day :)MaxiVelascohttp://www.ovahcoffee.comnoreply@blogger.com